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Write the Tightrope: A Shortcut to Balance in Fiction Writing

Have you ever been at a party with that person who just won’t stop talking? Well, it’s the same thing with your writing. Fiction is built, more or less, out of four basic parts: dialogue, thoughts, actions, and descriptions. All the best fiction has a good balance of these four parts, and when you get too much or too little, bad things start to happen. If all your characters do is talk, your readers will stop listening. If all your characters do is move, your readers will wish for a little emotional depth. If all they do is describe things, your readers will be like, “Oh my God, his eyes were BLUE we get it already!” This is an issue I’ve worked with a ton in my editing business, and so I eventually came up with a quicker way for...
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Playing the Pauses: Playlist, Behind-the-Scenes Secrets & Bonus Chapters!

If you can’t get enough of Danny & Kate from Playing the Pauses and Tie Me Down, you’ve come to the right place. Let’s start off with a collage I made for inspiration while I was writing… Bonus Chapters! (Mild spoilers ahead) This mini-ebook contains two deleted scenes from Playing the Pauses. First is a dinner at Jera’s parents’ house in Portland with the whole band, and second is when Kate and Danny go home together afterwards and the rating gets quite a bit higher…and steamier! Click on the cover below to get your free download.   Playing the Pauses Playlist Full Playlist with behind the scenes info and a YouTube link to listen along: https://booklovingpixies.me/2018/03/05/excerpt-tour-playing-the-pauses-sex-love-and-rock-roll-2-by-michelle-hazen/comment-page-1   Songs That Inspired the Characters of Kate and Danny http://www.thevoluptuousbookdiva.com/2018/03/playing-pauses-by-michelle-hazen.html   The Inspiration Behind Playing the Pauses http://theworldasiseeitbloganddesigns.com/2018/03/05/playing-pauses-michelle-hazen-guest-post/   Danny’s Online Dating Profile...
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5 Minute Fiction: Through the Bars

Have you ever seen a picture and thought, “God, there’s a whole book in that one image…” This is a little flash fiction for one of those pictures. Ages 18+ only please, for dark subject matter. “Don’t. It’s not your fault.” “We need to get water. When was the last time you ate? Look, try to find a hollow by the window while it’s still raining. We don’t have any way to carry it but we can drink now, maybe soak it up into our clothes for later. But no, if we wear them the sweat might ruin it. Salt. Salt counteracts hydration.” “It doesn’t hurt.” “The fuck it–” His shout cracked into silence, then a whisper. “Don’t lie to me. I’m not weak, Mari. I can take it. You know I can get us out of here.” “Okay.” She...
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