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5 Ways to Write A Better Edit Letter

When you’re giving feedback on a manuscript, there are two parts to writing the edit letter: The craft stuff: how you think the book could be strengthened. The emotional dimension: getting your author to the right headspace to actually make the changes. The second skill is the one that editors most often ignore or shortcut. After all, they figure, I told them what was wrong with their book. What else do they want from me? But the second skill is the one that’s the most important to get good results. Picture courtesy of Dustin Lee, Unsplash What? What did I just say? That emotions are more important to the revision process than craft? Yes, absolutely I said it. Before I was a writer, I was a counselor, and one thing I learned is that it doesn’t matter nearly as much...
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5 Minute Fiction: Empty Graves

If you look at the ground in the desert long enough, you’ll find a body. Whether it’ll belong to the kind of animal with hands or the kind with paws is anybody’s guess. This 5-minute short story is based on an empty grave I found in the Mohave Desert years ago. It wasn’t just a cross: there are loads of those, and most of them are memorials instead of graves. This one was a cross with a mound of dirt just the right size to cover a person, laid carefully with stones to keep animals from digging it up. It was in a remote area where five women had disappeared, and were rumored to have joined a cult whose deserted buildings were also located nearby. Their bodies were never found, and they were never heard from again. For that reason,...
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Unbreak Me releases today!

I’m so excited to share my newest book with you! It was named one of Amazon’s Best Books of the Month, received starred reviews from Publisher’s Weekly and Booklist, and it’s my first ever book that will have an audiobook edition (narrated by the award-winning Adenrele Ojo!). This book has so many of my favorite things in it. A cowboy who knows his way around a kitchen Horses New Orleans An irreverent sense of humor Musicians A wounded woman learning to trust again Found family Cooking lessons & lots of mouth-watering foodie fantasies Hurt/comfort and friends to lovers tropes A mom who takes no sh*t from anyone A slow burn that builds to a 5 chili pepper heat level! So without further ado, let me introduce you to my latest book, UNBREAK ME, out today from Berkley Books at Penguin...
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